Think... legs maybe too long? Also bleh, hands and feet.

Update:

Trying to clean up the sketch. I hate hands so much. :(

 

Super sketchy sketch. Need to pretty it more but.

Bluhh. I don't like the faces on this. I need to fix them. And probably weird proportions. I don't know. I might redraw the whole thing and try from my head instead of from a reference. But then... I donno. I feel like from my head, I don't really do anything with foreshortening at all, and the poses always end up looking the same...

... also in afterthought I should have left the sketchier lines under this in the picture, because their legs look all messed up without them. D: Ohwell. I guess see what Windy thinks and then work from there tomorrow maybe.