Think... legs maybe too long? Also bleh, hands and feet.

Update:

Trying to clean up the sketch. I hate hands so much. :(

 

Super sketchy sketch. Need to pretty it more but.

Bluhh. I don't like the faces on this. I need to fix them. And probably weird proportions. I don't know. I might redraw the whole thing and try from my head instead of from a reference. But then... I donno. I feel like from my head, I don't really do anything with foreshortening at all, and the poses always end up looking the same...

... also in afterthought I should have left the sketchier lines under this in the picture, because their legs look all messed up without them. D: Ohwell. I guess see what Windy thinks and then work from there tomorrow maybe.

Started and to-go-unfinished

 

So original sketch, then attempt at color. Kind of.... don't like how it's going. Don't like the eyes, can't really fix them without completely erasing them, don't wanna bother. So probably just going to start fresh.

Playing with trying to layer color ontop of a grayscale sketch. Character is my miqo'te in FFXIV, Y'khress.

 Take two.